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A Dieing Flame
Contributed by
catz77
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Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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In an old cabin far away
Sat a hopeless old man
A small flame watched him from the fireplace
His eyes were light and shaky
His vision was almost gone
He breathed heavily as he listened to his heart beat
He rocked slowly and gently in his chair
The old chair creaked as he watched the red logs
waiting for the dim flame to die out
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2006-12-13 23:43:14]
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Re: A Dieing Flame
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:52:40 AM AEST
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I like the poem.it truly captures the poor old man beside the fireplace, and I can almost see him fall off his rocking chair through the fogged wndow in his little cottage...
great write!
cheers,
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