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Never Ending Battle
Contributed by
Mila
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 02:39:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In such short time you have affected my life in a deep way that I cant explain. Im not sure what it is about you but Im addicted to you so badly that nothing comes in between my feelings. Being with you I feel so good & I love feeling that way. Youre my freedom, joy, love, excitement & most of all part of me. It doesnt matter what youve done or will do because I will feel the same towards you. Yet so many to compete with whom are against you & I feel strangled up with thoughts to deal with & I ask will this battle end. Probably it wont but having so strong feelings for you it doesnt matter since emotions are not easy to control or to battle with. For me you are not a battle but a victory.
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2006-12-15 02:39:21]
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Re: Never Ending Battle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:07:05 AM AEST
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| Reads more like an essay than a poem, yet flows like a poem not an essay, and over all, I like it. |
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