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Marionette
Contributed by
Helena
on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:30:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Strings attached to front and back
limbs have lost their will.
The curtain rises with the sun
see what they want to still
its not me!
Open my mouth to speak
a voice thats not my own,
disagree with the speech
and yet the world goes on.
No one notices the controlled glance,
the words that just dont match
live in an endless trance.
Call me Pinocchio and let me be,
This worlds marionette has forgotten
what its like to be free.
Copyright ©
Helena
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2006-12-15 15:30:35]
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Re: Marionette
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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Ah very lyrical write. As you hold the strings this piece dances in my mind.
Good Job
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Re: Marionette
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 11:51:49 PM AEST
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I followed my dear friend Yang to this write & I can say without a doubt, his lead was true. I like this alot. Good job! Right on...write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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