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A Closed Hand
Contributed by
lyddie
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 03:38:52 PM in AEST
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A closed hand
And the rage takes control
Closed eyes
And the memories come back
It's haunting me
A silent scream is all
That will be heard
A mouth sewn shut
And ears that hear all
Never to hear the words
She speaks
Silent and screaming
As the rage takes control!
by : Lydia Badgwell
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lyddie
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2006-12-15 15:38:52]
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Re: A Closed Hand
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 09:41:09 AM AEST
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This is good it is a heartfelt expression of anger. When working with others who have 'rage' issues the first thing to check are balled fists, clenched jaw, body posture etc.
With pen in hand rage spills upon the page is flattened out and can be seen for what it is.
Good Job
Peace
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