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Broken Heart
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 08:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Broken Hearted
Feeling Glum
What I spoke
Was really dumb
I really know
I want to be
Spending time
Just you and me
Alas I accept
If still its no
But out with you
I want to go
So perhaps next week
As you say
Ill try to wait
For the day
March 2nd 2006
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Balmain_Tiger
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2006-12-15 20:51:15]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 09:10:13 PM AEST
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The mother in me wants to mother you in response to the yearning expressed in this write. I want to tuck you in & tell you that the big bad world will go away, but you probably already have a mother...Just know you yanked the heart strings. Good job!!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Broken Heart
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 01:11:49 AM AEST
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Touching write.
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