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You dont know her like i know her
Contributed by
eden
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 09:46:19 PM in AEST
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Bake rinse scumble
Bake rinse scumble
You dont know her like I know her
No. I dont. Thenwho does?
Is it all just some game? Where is the truth?
Whats the obsession with the truth anyway? Why do we need truth?
To preserve honesty
Whats honest?
Nothings honest anymore
Is that the problem?
No, thats the answer
The answer to what?
Your question
So who is she really?
More questions. Shes bake rinse scumble, bake rinse scumble.
Repetition
Order
Nothing
Nothings honest anymore
Why not?
I dont know
Shes standing
Why is she standing!
Because theres nowhere to sit
Well get her a chair then
I cant
Why not
Because shes busy
Doing what
Bake rinse scumble
What does that mean
Youre hurting her stop it!
Im not doing anything!
STOP IT!
Bake rinse scumble
You dont know her like I know her
How could I?
Youve trapped her you know
How could I?
It wasnt intentional
No
Was it honest?
Honest entrapment
Are you honest?
Yes
Kind?
Yes
Rinse?
How could I?
You dont know her like I know her.
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eden
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Re: You dont know her like i know her
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 10:12:06 AM AEST
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an odd one, but well, what can I say? I liked it! I can see what you mean about the things going off in your head, it has that fregmented feel a train of thought often has... and only fools look for meaning in poetry... the only person who can ever undestand the meaning is you. Good, interesting work.
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