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Afterlife
Contributed by
The_View
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Friday, 15th December 2006 @ 11:13:23 PM in AEST
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Walking through the halls of self repentance
Only problem is Im going the wrong way
Jesus isnt calling, and Satans door is closed
Fork in the road, and everything is blocked but down
My inquisitions they call insalubrious
Everything dismissed, day to night
Dropped my thoughts all over the floor
Continuing on blind, Im starting from square one
Through the eye of god, the emerald glass
Flames erupt about, tentively reaching for the sky
Eternal hell, I think not
Just a burning place where souls rot
Ignoring the heat, is quite the feat
But not impossible, if you forget despair
The emotionless mind bypasses the pain
Though it cant feel the joy of escaping either
Freedom from flame
Entering the blue, while still crimson stained
Wandering without a place to inhabit, cursing fate
Lost by yourself in the afterlife, where no open arms wait
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Re: Afterlife
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 01:08:48 AM AEST
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I loved the line dropped my thoughts on the floor... something about that really grabbed me.
Entire content of this write is well written and related to as well.
~Michelle~ |
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