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We Call Eachother Friends?
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 01:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I pretend in you Pretend you are my true friend You only seem to care When you're alone With those strangers we know so well Those strangers we call friends As if I'm your back-up friend When theres no one else to be there For you That's only when you care
Our so called friendship Is blocked by stone cold ice Aquantinces we shall be called Just call upon me When others leave you behind When you need attention When you need the constant spotlight
I know where I stand On your list of aquantinces So very few you have left I know where I stand I know where you keep me I know how distant you want me So very few are true, close, friends For you
Oh my dear Cold aquantince We shall call eachother friends For we only play make-believe In this world of reality
Never shall we part As cold aquantinces We musn't alter this fictionated reality
So here we stand Blocked by ice Aquantinces we shall be called
In our fictionated reality We call eachother friends
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The_Unknown
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2006-12-16 01:32:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: We Call Eachother Friends?
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 05:50:30 AM AEST (User
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Well done,
Again u r wise for your age.
luv's ya,
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Re: We Call Eachother Friends?
(User Rating: 1 ) by LetTheSunComeUp on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 03:35:26 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed reading this one.
I know the feeling you've expressed in your poem well. It hurts when someone doesn't place as much value in a friendship as you do. When they seem to only see you as a "back-up friend" it can leave you feeling used. You did a nice job of conveying that in your poem.
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