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Run, Fall, Change
Contributed by
Ratwick
on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 02:10:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fall Away
And pick up the pieces that resemble your face
All away
Then try to remember what it was you'd have changed
Gone astray
When you loved that boy or you loved that girl
When you took those pills without a care in the world
When you picked up that gun
Come on man, have some fun
Destroy the world
Destroy your world
Hey, man, look at me
Im havin fun
I feel something but Im not sure what Ive become
Hey man, are you livin free?
Are you havin fun?
Can you suck it all up and remember whats done is done?
I feel something but Im not sure what I've become
Can you ***** it all up and remember whats done is done?
Sean MacLeod
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Ratwick
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2006-12-16 02:10:11]
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Re: Run, Fall, Change
(User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 09:08:54 AM AEST
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The beat that you set this to blends it together
Brazen phrases that bite yet stay in context with your title.
This piece is reachin for a taste of old school...Good Job
Keep the Pen Flowing
Peace
Yang
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