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(Unfinished song)
Contributed by
Ratwick
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Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 02:21:12 AM in AEST
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I remember when we used to play
Drinkin gin 'n juice, that was back in tha day
We would drive all night
We would sleep all day
Talk of fighting for right, but never know what to say...hey..
whatever
Now it's over and done, roughly 6 years ago
I hope you've all had your fun
I hope you went where you'd go
Well I'm not done
And I'm not gone
I'm still believing in reasons that I know not much of
Copyright ©
Ratwick
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2006-12-16 02:21:12]
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Re: (Unfinished song)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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| it's gonna rock when it's done |
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Re: (Unfinished song)
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by satanssecret1369 on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 05:17:17 AM AEST
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As poetry, this didn't do much for me, but when I re-read it and kind of envisioned (or heard, I suppose) a tune to accompany it, this really got me.
I'm not so sure how you could revise it or anything, because, well, writing is from the heart, and I don't think anyone should ever revise due to what someone else says, but I will say I'm anticipating the rest of this.
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Re: (Unfinished song)
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by Teusday-Moon on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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| I really like it so far. I think it will be awesome in the end |
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Re: (Unfinished song)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 12:56:35 PM AEST
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| It's something that's easy to imagine, and has a very catchy flow. I'm like the rest....I eagerly await the finished work. |
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