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sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
Contributed by
blindchoice
on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 04:40:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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put your hope on the line kiss the lips of time and say youll be mine cause when the ball drops all will be lost and gone forever so help me now to chase away never
sing me to sleep and look into my eyes say you love me just one last time your lullabuy so bitter sweet sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
the tide will rush in touch us now and then and we will win the love of eachother and time will hover over us so help me now please you must
sing me to sleep and look into my eyes say you love me just one last time your lullabuy so bitter sweet sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
so now in the end my heart to you i send this is it the end
sing me to sleep and look into my eyes say you love me just one last time your lullabuy so bitter sweet sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saloni on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 05:05:25 PM AEST (User
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brilliant!!!!! this poem nearly made me cry! |
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 05:18:31 PM AEST (User
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wow this is so sad.. you can feel the sadness in this and a great flow to this piece.. I like the layout and how this could be one of those sad songs.. awesome expression in this.. i really enjoyed this piece
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Faust on
Sunday, 17th December 2006 @ 10:34:40 PM AEST (User
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This poem is very strong but I think it would be stronger as a song.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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Re: sing me to sleep with tears in your eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 08:47:17 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful read...Very nice..
honey |
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