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Crosbie Faces
Contributed by
NDean
on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 05:09:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Faces Meld
In Iridescent Beauty
Their neon looks
Glow like Suns
Trapped in a Hourglass
Endlessly Climbing
Endlessly Searching
Without
Cause
Copyright ©
NDean
... [
2006-12-18 05:09:31]
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Re: Crosbie Faces
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wilder on
Monday, 18th December 2006 @ 06:16:50 AM AEST
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Short but sweet. The ending:
Without
Cause...
Kind of made it seem sad, like these faces don't know why they are, they just... are. Well done =) |
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Re: Crosbie Faces
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by Crookedpoet09 on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:57:13 PM AEST
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| The atmosphere was set with just two words "without cause..." giving the poem a sad feel. How good is that? Well done. |
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