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One Lonely Tear
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 12:45:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Outside I Sit,
Smoking a Cigarette,
Looking Around,
A Tear Falls.
One Lonely Tear,
Falls from my Eye,
And I fight the Urge to Cry.
Its Hard being There,
For Everyone.
Its Harder being a Protector,
For my Loved Ones,
Its Harder Still,
To be Alone.
One Lonely Tear,
Falls to the Ground,
It Hits,
But makes no Sound.
No one will Know,
Because I will Never Show,
The Scars Within,
My Deepest Sins,
The Chaos in my Mind.
One Lonely Tear,
Falls from my Eye,
And I look to the Unforgiving Sky,
Asking for Strength.
Asking for Hope.
Asking for a Reason,
To keep on Living.
Harder and Harder,
Each day Becomes,
To keep on Going.
But I wake Up,
And thank God,
For Creating Me.
But Here I Sit,
Looking at the Sky,
With a Tear Falling.
One Lonely Tear,
Falls From My Eye.....
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-12-19 00:45:39]
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Re: One Lonely Tear
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 02:58:21 PM AEST
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Boy how I relate to this. Again another beautiful yet tear jerker of a write my friend.
I am glad to know I am not the only one that looks to the sky alot.
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Re: One Lonely Tear
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 05:39:56 PM AEST
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I can so much relate to what you have written. You have penned what I could not. You had tears in my eyes for I know only too well of this terrible pain and sadness that you speak of.
A very sad, heart breaking and emotional piece of poetry. Wishing you much brighter days ahead.
hugs n prayers,
dreamer |
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Re: One Lonely Tear
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by SilverDagger on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 02:40:42 AM AEST
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I hope that things look up (no pun intended) for you in the future. This is a poignant piece that evoked strong emotions withing me. I'm going through a somewhat similar phase, so...
No one will Know,
Because I will Never Show,
The Scars Within,
My Deepest Sins,
The Chaos in my Mind.
Excellent work! And may you find peace of mind. |
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Re: One Lonely Tear
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by MandiLee on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 07:34:15 PM AEST
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wow!! mike thats amazing that almost exacly how i felt today when i held my best friends hand him sitting there forced to talk to a councilor bacause he told some one about his secret of cutting, he kept crying! and i felt so bad that i barely even showed an emotion! Just one simple little tear cuz i had to hide the fact that i have done that to in the past. this poem hits deep
hope you had a good time being a UPS guy... |
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