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TIME
Contributed by
ahaynes
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Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 11:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You told me that you needed some time
But all I can think of is damn your fine
I thought to my self and told my self , I will try
And I must have been the luckiest guy
I wanted you to be with me and to give me a chance
To show you that it is easy to forget about the past
You said it was too early and to give it some time
But to me , I am running out of time
I dont know what to do , or to say
But to sit here and think , to think
Of what I could have done to be your Hun
Do one thing for me , and forget him
Yea .. its hard cause you two went pretty damn far
But one day I want to be that guy
Who you think of every night
To be there, when your glad , sad , and maybe when your mad
What I am trying to say is , give me a shot , and dont leave me with my head in the ground
And I promise I wont let you down
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ahaynes
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2006-12-20 11:14:59]
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Re: TIME
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by evangelise on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 12:25:30 PM AEST
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i like this, very heart felt,
and has meaning |
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Re: TIME
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by evangelise on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 09:17:30 AM AEST
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i like this , love the way you wrote it,
a story of thoughts, from the heart.
well done, enjoyed reading this |
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