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Relief
Contributed by
nothingness
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Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 01:31:06 PM in AEST
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A girl sat with a gun in her hand
She thought it out and had it planned
But something stopped her on the way
Something that she had everyday
So many people really do care
And they really want her to be there
Feeling guilty but so relieved
They actually listened and believed
She put the gun down on the floor
Feeling stronger then ever before
I wonder if those people knew
Exactly what their words would do
That together they gave some hope
And some words to help her cope
That as a group they helped her decided
Never to think about or choose suicide
Copyright ©
nothingness
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2006-12-20 13:31:06]
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Re: Relief
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 03:02:48 PM AEST
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Its good to know that you have finally gotten through those suicidal thoughts. We are all here for ya hun, sometimes the only people who will help you up are complete strangers. Keep the good work up!
Mike |
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Re: Relief
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 04:41:38 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. I am glad to see you are feeling better.. you are a cared about person .. don't forget that.. you have a purpose and remember God loves you as do all of us here.. take care of yourself..
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Relief
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by RLSS on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:09:30 PM AEST
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| Live life- it's worth it. The expression is worth it, this is worth it. You are strong. Stay strong- your poetry is. |
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Re: Relief
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 08:02:22 PM AEST
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There are so many here who would love so much to help you including myself. Feel free whenever you want to pm me. There is a much brighter future out there for you my friend. Never feel alone for we are always here for you~
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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