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As the year ends
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 04:00:58 PM in AEST
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The time has come to look again
back through these months just now past,
Giving a sigh of regret - I ponder
Did each of us do enough
for our fellow man
The year was filled with joys and tears
Some people stayed gone
and others came back again
The world affairs has had its strains
and we the human race
are All to blame.
Doubts ,
suspicions and
wars
This world globe has seen it all.
Crying still
for the children and the unborn
Still sending the soldiers off
to die for a cause
they them selves have little known.
Trusting those left behind to make all the decisions
of what this next year shall bring round.
The Seasons close when the months grow dark ,
Cold creeps in and all the rest follow
Yet our wishes ,issues and concerns are still our OWN
And still we ignor the signs
How does so many hearts contuine beating
and living on faith that relief
will come soon
And all will be as it was written
it shall be.
Sending more prayers to the Leaders of the lands,
the dispursers of Love and Hate
Couldn't they put all anger aside
and just Negotiate .
Peace and Understanding and forgiving
Giving every man,woman and child
freedom and a good life
Amen
Merry Christmas
Whisper
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Whisper
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2006-12-21 16:00:58]
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Re: As the year ends
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 06:36:06 PM AEST
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A sensitive heart pulses under these words... a fine write of strong and sure comviction.
Thank You
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Re: As the year ends
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by ArezzoSunrise on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 01:49:32 PM AEST
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| I thought I'd return the favor! I read several of your but I liked this one the best.The poem moves around a lot and I like that about it. The individual stanzas stand apart, but they come together very well.Good work! |
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