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Untitled
Contributed by
trini
on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 04:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Throbbing
This headache
Oppressive pain
Uncontrollable urges
To kill
The thought stresses against my skull
Crushing every judgment
Even though the attempt is futile
I want love
Not skin under my fingernails
I dont want to be buried alive
The winter has iced my heart
When its all said and done
Spring will do its part
Until then
Ill sit
And wait
In the dark
Unpretentiously
Letting my skull crack open.
Copyright ©
trini
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2006-12-21 16:46:10]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 06:52:22 PM AEST
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WOW!
Very unusual metaphors. Like having a migraine and a broken heart at the same time....but even more....
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