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Star Struck
Contributed by
Epic
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Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 10:57:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Beauty is defined by a persons perspective
And mine is that of star struck
When my eyes gaze upon this radiating star
Im struck with this cents of awe
I feel its warmth
Against my skin
This feeling of greatness
With no real sins
A star like this Ive never seen
It seems as if it is just calling me
Telling me to explore its galaxies
And someday hope for more
This star seems so different
In to many ways to explain
Its speaks in languages and ways
That I thought I would never truly understand
I feel as if I was meant to discover
This feeling of connected souls
Ive truly never fell this fast
For such a beautiful girl
This star that took my breath away
Is far to great for words
But never the less I must say
She is truly out of this world
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Epic
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2006-12-21 22:57:39]
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Re: Star Struck
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 04:00:39 PM AEST
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this is a very sweet write.. I like the approach you took as making it like a girl was a star.. awesome job.. it shows alot of devotion and that to you this is your beauty.. awesome!!
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