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Notice
Contributed by
Jen_unknown_to_myself
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Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 07:38:50 PM in AEST
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At times I feel as if he doesnt even notice me.
He could be talking to me and not realize I was the one he was talking to.
But I've got to protect my heart
I cant let it get to me
I wont let it get to me
Thats not working to well though
He doesnt realize how many tears he causes
He doesnt realize I'm here and always have been
He probably won't even notice when Im gone
Soon I will know if he does notices me
For I might not be here for much longer.
For to many tears slide down my face to stay with this pain
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2006-12-22 19:38:50]
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Re: Notice
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by Smartie on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 09:08:57 PM AEST
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Wow, thats amazing...I know what it's like to love someone more than anything...and to once even know they loved you as much as you loved them...and no that...everytime you see them, you just have to stop and look at them...and still they don't even notice you...prefect way of putting it into words.
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Re: Notice
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by EddieDean on
Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 09:05:38 PM AEST
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Wow, great work, it must be real hard to be there for someone and to have such deep feelings about them and they don't even notice you. A nice poem indeed, but I've said it many times, suicide is never an option.
Life moves on, and so should you.
May peace find you soon.
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