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Darkness is found in peace
Contributed by
ravensofthedark
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Saturday, 23rd December 2006 @ 01:52:19 PM in AEST
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Fun At The Beach
Once with start I found it near the shark, screams of joy, I see all these kids playing with their toys, the jig is up, I have started digging to the top, once with so many props now that seem empty, no fun they wont let us run because its to dangerous, now here at the beach, I see all the kids screech with humor I dont even mind the tumor.
~ The Raven
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Re: Darkness is found in peace
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:24:42 PM AEST
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this was good but I think we connect on way deeper levels if you stuck with the beautiful dark side of poetry. Together we can cloak this world in our despair and make them pay for making us feel this way.
Yours in the darkness
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