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Questions That Break The Idea Of A Car Crash Love With The Answer Of You Love Me

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 10:39:32 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



gently brushing against eachother.

his arm around her back in an "i love you", "your mine" kind of way,

a tear forms and she starts to choke out "i'm happy, really."

but it was more of a "never let go",what she meant to say.

and as she so slyly looks into his piercing blue eyes,

falling deeper and deeper into the words that so easily slip.

a motion simply fades into the night,

spent so softly touching and then losing grip.

as their feet move in a beat one by one, door to door,

only leading to their departing, which they're never good at goodbye.

to the high point in which she waits for every night in his arms,

"i love you" a phrase, the truth, the love, it is no lie.

another simple gesture of clicking that holds us away from being us,

but then i fall so tiredly to sleep and dream, of your innocence, your eyes.

and it helps me hold on, til this emptiness just breaks inside of me, like a lung won't let me breath.

and then i just shatter, deep breaths, crying eyes, a faint smile, and weak sighs.

but then i turn to the only last piece of wreckage from this beautiful car crash we call l o v e.

and i grip it in, mark my heart with it, and leave it there, to remember,

that every time i try to fight it, to become weak, and to give in,

your love can always make me slowly, unwillingly, surrender.

but this thing screams in my mind, in your eyes, in my heart.

don't let go. never let go. i can't let go, won't ever let go.

words we never whisper hidden in the smiles we exchange when together.

it just comes with the "i love you", "i love you too" that we so emotionally show.

but baby as this goodbye approaches, crawls closer, draws nearer,

i won't let this be it, wont let you change your mind, be mine.

tell me once again, though i know it, i know you do. you love me.

baby, i just want you to tell me you love me, i know i will be fine.

<2




Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2006-12-25 10:39:32]
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Re: Questions That Break The Idea Of A Car Crash Love With The Answer Of You Love Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 02:27:50 PM AEST
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i like your poems better when ur in love.

dunno why. just do. xD

hehe, love ya!!!

- Bethani -


Re: Questions That Break The Idea Of A Car Crash Love With The Answer Of You Love Me (User Rating: 1 )
by VR2776 on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 03:59:25 PM AEST
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beautiful ...Its great to be in Love ... : )




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