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The Note
Contributed by
ml02
on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Footsteps
On cold
Damp floor
Did you forget me
Already
Footsteps
Stallin'
To begin
This is the end
This is the note
To all
That loved me
Goodbye
I'll see
You all in
Hell
I know its not
Proper
Or nice
To say
But
You know
We ain't been saints
And if the bible
Doesn't lie
Then we're
Doomed
To Hell
And
So its goodbye
And so long
Don't worry
Don't cry
I'm not right
Down on my knees
Back
And forth
Cryin'
Pushin'
The razor
Deeper
And deeper
And you can't stop me
Daddy
So
The blood
Is flowing
And the bottle of pills
I took with the liquor
Is startin' its efect
And its goin' blurry
Last words
Copyright ©
ml02
... [
2003-02-19 19:20:00]
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Re: The Note
(User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 01:48:41 AM AEST
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| ah, compelling and very haunting... excellent poem... |
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Re: The Note
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by sweetestsin101 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:02:20 PM AEST
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| omg, that is an amazing write!!! wonderful!!!! |
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