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Heartaches
Contributed by
RandyBabyx3
on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 06:55:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was going camping with my friend
like Ive done before
but this camping trip brought surprises
that found me on the floor.
I didnt know how much it hurt
for someone to break your heart
but try it in a weekend
being torn apart.
I found him at the river
we quickly fell in love
but it wasnt till later that night
what had happend above.
He asked me a question
and i simple refused
not thinking of the consiquences
and how i'd be accused.
Weeks later we still talked
through random texts, here and there
but i had still felt
that he was everywhere.
Now talking through AIM
he called me a whore
i flipped out
and then he called me more.
trying to stay calm
through the crying pain
i simply blocked him
but my life wasnt the same.
So i tryed to talk one last time
but it didnt work
he told me to go to hell
i thought what a jerk.
Im through the pain
and glad im done making those mistakes
and take my advice
forget the heartaches.
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RandyBabyx3
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2006-12-26 18:55:46]
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Re: Heartaches
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 07:33:25 PM AEST
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this had good flow, keep writing it is the best therapy, this is a moving write and very well expressed
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Re: Heartaches
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by random_xoxo on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 07:51:55 PM AEST
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| yeah austin is an ***** miranda! we all know you can do way better than that sad excuse of a man lmfaoo... cuz your such a total babe!!! lol and im the only one that can call you a whore!!! WE ARE WHORES TOGETHER!!! lol.. but ew no not like that lol we are just bestest friends with the same profession :whoreness or whoreism =) |
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Re: Heartaches
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by metalguitarist on
Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:11:39 PM AEST
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i love the poem SUNSHINE!!! guess who it is
its me Kyle |
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Re: Heartaches
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 01:35:22 AM AEST
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A lovely poem though sad and yet on the other hand an experience had is a valued lesson. As for not having the best poetry i
can tell you, be your self as you are in this writting, expressing honesty straight from
the heart, and you will have accomplished what most can only hope for, and that is to
just be accepted for who you are, and what you write about will be more appreciated.
Best is a relative term, what's good to one may not be to another, just simply remember one thing, and that is you may be sharing something with some one out there who's going through exactly what your going
through, that don't make you the best, it makes you true to your writting and a real artist. Any writting should touch and move another even if only one person reads it, not impress the masses. keep up the good work.
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Re: Heartaches
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by jada on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 01:52:28 AM AEST
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| OMG i'm seriously going to cry! this is sad -_- great poem |
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