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Christmas wish
Contributed by
joe89
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Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 12:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flamboyant tiny princess
granting Christmas wishes
flying through the fog like its 1989
wake up to the snow
and hear the whistle blow
family fortunes prizes arent what they used to be
but im sure darling, one day youll see
you own all my love, bumble bee
dont make the mistakes i made
at least not today.
fall from the trees of spring,
do your own thing.
flamboyant tiny princess
granting Christmas wishes
light up my tree like its 1989 again.
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joe89
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2006-12-27 12:23:20]
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Re: Christmas wish
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 08:23:52 PM AEST
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I like this, it's interesting. I'm not sure I exactly follow all of it, but it makes me think and catched my eye.
I really like that last line. Unique.
Well done.
Phil xxx |
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