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Natural Blonde
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 10:14:10 PM in AEST
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everyone's goin blonde
simply because
the need for dramatics
sad, sad sight
why can't we be happy
with what we already have?
maybe i just don't like change
to the point of hate
maybe, it's just me
it seems to me
everybody wants
everything they can't have
seems to me
we all wanna be perfect
if we were all alike - would we all be perfect?
define perfection
can you please?
no, i thought not
all those
who are dark, beautifully mysterious
all feel the need to change
just because one beauty is blonde
does that mean that being lighter,
will make you prettier?
i used to be an original
until now
we're all just clones
everybody trying to look like somebody else
it's not exactly smart
we all lose our originality - our human-ness
what's the point, really?
or do you just do this
without a rhyme or reason?
what you got
is what you got
why make it different?
maybe i should dye my hair black
as the midnight writer i am
color of ink and pain
why do all the non-conformists
all the look-at-me-i'm-emo&totally-different
why do they all look the same?
blondes used to have more fun
until you stole it all from us
natural blondes, that is
can you be yourself
without being me?
i don't understand
this need for constant change
does being the only sane person
make you insane?
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Re: Natural Blonde
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by Epic on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 10:38:47 PM AEST
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| i understand what your talking about, we live in a world where image defines all and conformity is never absent. we need to understand that all we have is our life, the materialistic objects that come with it mean nothing in the end. GREAT WRITE. |
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Re: Natural Blonde
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by ArezzoSunrise on
Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 10:46:58 PM AEST
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| I read a lot of stuff on this site and I don't comment on most of it, but I must say I really liked this.There are no cliches that don't seem intentional.There is a consistant voice thoughout the poem (I have problems with this).You did well.I have a girl friend that would love this perhpas more than I did.Read my stuff and tell me what you think, even though I'm just getting started on here.Thanks and good job. |
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