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Lady & Lion
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 10:35:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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There's a legend of a lady who crys by the ocean~
she drifts through moonlight, disguising her tears as rain
With poetic hands, she cradles the memory in rhyme~
of her long ago Lion & his loves ever changing reign...
Forever lives that of which we are all a part~
& apart she broke into a little girl once more
An abandoned child left searching for whats lost~
"Where's my King", she crys, "With my new Queen", the beast roars...
Drowning in a water~colored world of emotions~
her once vivid self, now misty without reflection
An empty shell to be washed up on shore~
so fragile that within no life seeks protection...
There's a legend of a lady who crys by the ocean...
Copyright ©
MisfitMe
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2006-12-28 22:35:38]
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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You always write with such passion which can be felt as one reads your poems. This is a true sign of a excellent poet. Thank you for sharing your works with us.
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by shelby on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 02:01:38 AM AEST
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Took my breath away with this one hun.
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 07:50:07 AM AEST
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Nice, Missy! It was like a wave of energy to read these words within your write:
"water~colored world of emotions"
It was an excitement of energy within me!
wabl
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 08:36:05 AM AEST
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exquisite write
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 11:47:47 PM AEST
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I involuntarily dropped the rose colored glass I normally view the world through to really feel this piece:
"...With poetic hands, she cradles the memory in rhyme..."
The legend maybe used to explain why the ocean tastes so salty...
Heres to fending off the roars of beasts!
Peace
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 06:21:56 AM AEST
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In all legends lay some truth, be they in spirit mind or body.
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Re: Lady & Lion
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:42:49 PM AEST
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I saw the tittle u know Lion lol. and i just had to read this little heart warming master peice. Simply Stunning.
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