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hidden love
Contributed by
indibabe46
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 04:20:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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bursting with confusion
my feelings don't have a definition
one side hatred one side love
but when i see him i moo like a cow
i just can't help it
i guess i fell inside the pit
in the night i wake up
thinking how he'll be like when he says what's up
and there itself i melt like choc. ice cream
but he doesn't know my love for him
so i simply scream
guess i'll have to sing the blues
but there he is without a clue
-amber
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Re: hidden love
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:31:56 AM AEST
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I liked this but the moo like a cow kind of threw me off a bit. To each their own it is your poetic expression. A little advice, tell the person how you feel. Life is to short not to. We all lose our nerve at times but one thing 2006 has taught me is to never let things go unsaid, specially with love. For tomorrow may never come.
Keep writing
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