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Miss Second Best
Contributed by
xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:08:50 AM in AEST
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so call me a quitter,
i don't rly care.
going between us two,
you really think that's fair.?
so what, i'm back-up.?
that's it, we're done.?
you're pulling the trigger on this gun.?
since when was it only you,
what happened to "i'm over her.".?
my thoughts a scramble, i can't think straight.
everything around me's just a blur.
so i guess i'll move on,
it wasn't that important or fun.
so just pull the trigger, aim right here.
end it all with the shot of a gun.
i can't stand to watch you,
fall back, and get hurt.
but i can't change your mind,
can't heal the pain under you're shirt.
so tell me why did you bother.?
i just wasted you're time.
to your face i'll say i will be,
but i'll never be fine.
but that doesn't matter,
pick up and get going.
will i secretly still love you,
without anyone knowing.?
i don't think so,
not after this.
there isn't one thing,
i will truly miss.
cause it hurt so bad,
to be miss second best.
to have my heart so willingly,
ripped out of my chest.
<2
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Re: Miss Second Best
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:56:17 AM AEST
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your pain is evident in this moving write...but believe it or not you will learn from this and the heart does heal
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Re: Miss Second Best
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:27:26 AM AEST
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Nothing worse than the that feeling and the hurt it leaves in your heart. It doesn't make you second best it only makes the offending party a first class jackass not to mention a huge poop. You will hurt for awhile but will later come to see that there is someone worthy of you. Good strong write.
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