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Untitled
Contributed by
drowningheart
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 10:00:45 AM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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The stars in the sky watched
As the shadows of the street stole my heart.
An empty feeling is all thats left,
you the thief that tore me apart
I will wait to see the light
for God or angels to make it right.
Were you a phantom,
or a spirit in the night?
A reaper, my heart withdrew,
He holds my love, my soul keeper.
Copyright ©
drowningheart
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2006-12-29 10:00:45]
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Re: Untitled
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 10:42:36 AM AEST
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the writes from the heart are usually the best ones and writing is a good form of therapy to help us heal
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Re: Untitled
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:18:19 PM AEST
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That was absolutely beautiful my friend.
Me thinks you ARE a poet. ( smiles)
Very well done
Roses
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Re: Untitled
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:13:52 PM AEST
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Actually, yes, you are a poet, writing from the heart. A poet is not one who uses words, persay, but one who words use. They flow from you, you don't try to twist them this way or that to fit, they just fit where they do, and they do it beautifully.
A very, very good first post. I mean, the fact that you start off with stars watching is beauty in itself. Anyway, I love your work, and I've only read two, so I need to read more.
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