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One Last Breath.
Contributed by
captian
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Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 08:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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cold comes, cold goes
yet these emotions are not fleeting.
i shed a tear on your behalf
your heart of stone
repelling my feeble attempts
Copyright ©
captian
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2006-12-29 20:24:22]
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Re: One Last Breath.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:09:17 PM AEST
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Sad when a heart just doesnt want to be loved....
I liked this one my friend
well done
Larry |
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Re: One Last Breath.
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by brew on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 02:38:27 PM AEST
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Beautiful, and to the point.....Yes, sometimes, the heart doesnt like to be loved, yet.Maybe they dont know how to love?! Thanks for sharing
Brew~ |
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Re: One Last Breath.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:39:10 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading this poem as it was short and sweet (unlike any of my poems) Thank you for sharing! |
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