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Tired
Contributed by
Trauma
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Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:17:03 AM in AEST
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Im tired of this
Im tired of feeling like this
You just think Im going to wait around forever for you
Theres so much I dig about you
I love how you are always nervously nodding your head
I love the way you keep constantly talking when you are scared
I love that your feet smell
You think youre ugly
You could give me a whole laundry list about whats wrong with how you look
But to me you couldnt be more lovely, and I wouldnt change a damn thing
You pretend to be so cold sometimes, but I see right through that
You dont fool me one bit
I see that you care too much and it overwhelms you
So you put on a mask of apathy
Your heart is too fragile for this world and that is the only defense you know
Let me be its shield
Never again will you have to fear of it being hurt, and never again will it be broken
You said to me no one will ever truly love you but someone does
Hes sitting here right now, missing you
But Ive just about had enough
My hearts fragile too
Ive told you I would always be there for you and I meant that
But I need you now and I cant take much more
And Im not waiting around forever
One day youll look up and Ill be gone
And I will belong to you no more
Copyright ©
Trauma
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2006-12-30 00:17:03]
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Re: Tired
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:22:26 AM AEST
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I loved this It's great u need to tell that girl how u feel she might feel the same way but its 50/50 chance it could turn out good or it could turn out bad either way if u tell or if u dont once again great poem and keep strong she'll come around
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Re: Tired
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:23:28 AM AEST
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I loved this It's great u need to tell that girl how u feel she might feel the same way but its 50/50 chance it could turn out good or it could turn out bad either way if u tell or if u dont once again great poem and keep strong she'll come around
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Re: Tired
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by SilverDagger on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:33:58 AM AEST
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| Great work! Keep it up! |
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Re: Tired
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:40:27 AM AEST
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Yes I would show this person this write. You sound to be a true heart defender. What more could one want. Loved the honesty.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Tired
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 03:39:30 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Tired
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:47:07 AM AEST
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Beautiful. Show her stubborn ass this write. Talk, talk and damn....don't give up. We gals can be a stubborn bunch, especially if we've been burned before. Please be patient. I and most women long for honesty. This is as about as honest as it gets. Thanks for sharing and good luck. Sounds like she shouldn't let you get away.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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