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“Is this funny?”
Contributed by
SilverDagger
on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 12:41:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Her harsh anguished screams resound
The air responds with pathetic pity
Pity for one who no longer understands
For one who is lost
Immersed, engrossed in the snares of insanity
She cries out once more
Why do you laugh?
You dont understand!
Is this funny?
You dont know what it feels
What it entails, to be me!
The people waiting outside
Oblivious of her pain
Laugh; their derisive laughter
Mocking her every sound
Silvery laughter fills the room
They are one in their condemnation
Why do you laugh? she cries
Is this funny? she asks
Questions which no one answers
No one wishes to
Unanimous in glee
A mute spectator watches
He does not move, does not speak
He realizes that everyone
Has troubles to hide, secrets to keep
The girl steps out, her eyes bloodshot
With rage, with frustration
Is this funny? she asks
He is silent for a while
She stares defiantly, her eyes offering a challenge
He spots the traces of a fight deep within
No, He answers and sighs.
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SilverDagger
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2006-12-30 00:41:41]
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Re: “Is this funny?”
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by Metikulus on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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| this is pretty good...has nice meaning attatched to it...keep up the good work |
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Re: “Is this funny?”
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:41:37 AM AEST
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You did a fine job writing this piece. It was very moving. Your last few lines were magnificient and hard hitting. "He" in the poem sounds like a wonderful soul and a grand observer. Well done and thank you for sharing. (Being a nurse and a bit mental myself *smiles*, I really appreciated the story here)
Peace, Laura |
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