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Out Of Luck...?
Contributed by
broken_not_beautiful
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Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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well here we are we just ran out of luck and now your telling me how you dont give a *****
so now whats gonna happen? is this really real? im feeling all the things you swore id never feel
the feeling of the forgotten the feeling of lost love if its lost then come and find me this isnt the ending ive dreamed of
press rewind and see it all here comes the rise there goes the fall
but exactly when did it all fall apart? was it before or after you stole my heart?
im told not to worry it will all work out fine lets stop with the replay im so sick of that line
tell me straight up dont drag this all out im sure breaking hearts is what your all about
too bad you cant break me so sorry to ruin your fun im already heavily broken so go ahead and run
if you want this to work you should act like you care or one day youll wake up and i just wont be there
you werent something i wanted no. you were a need. you never understood me but i was easy to read
i tried to tell you without words how much you meant to me but when i looked you in the eyes you just never seemed to see
so save this love and youll save me too lets keep this thing going and make something new
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2006-12-30 18:11:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Out Of Luck...?
(User Rating: 1 ) by RandyBabyx3 on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 06:15:20 PM AEST (User
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Kailee...
Its sooo good. Whats up with josh? or is this one not about josh? Well whatever it is i hope it works out. Great poem, like usual. I mean you are soo good at this. LOL.
I love youuuuuu ♥
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Re: Out Of Luck...?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 12:15:01 AM AEST (User
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Great write. I can relate.
Unknown to myself
Jen |
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