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Untitled (suggestions welcome)
Contributed by
idkwhatimdoing5
on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 04:24:53 AM in AEST
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oops
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Think about who you are
Is this where you want to be?
Or did you mess* up?
Maybe, just maybe, it doesnt matter
It never has
Inspiration has come
There is something in the air
Or maybe youve left
Youve overdosed on life, you are no more
Not anymore
So, do not worry
You will never feel again
Is this what you want?
This may not feel bad, but it wont feel good
Ever again
Forget about it
The hope that comes with this life
Is spoiled; its gone
But you shouldnt worry, you dont feel this
So, be at peace
*-supposed to be another four letter word. haha.
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Re: Untitled (suggestions welcome)
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 02:54:21 PM AEST
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Re: Untitled (suggestions welcome)
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 12:02:59 PM AEST
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