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The Ledge
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Sunday, 31st December 2006 @ 08:48:59 PM in AEST
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Standing up on a ledge,
I compare myself to you.
Where you have lost, I have gained
But everything falls through.
Standing up on this ledge,
I see myself in this mirror,
How I became like this,
It's nothing short of terror.
Standing up on this ledge,
I rank myself so lowly.
Beating down upon myself,
I feel the tears run slowly.
Standing up on this ledge,
I compare myself to you.
Where I have lost, you have gained,
But everything falls through.
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2006-12-31 20:48:59]
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Re: The Ledge
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:27:55 PM AEST
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