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Voices...
Contributed by
MisfitMe
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Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 05:10:06 PM in AEST
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Alone, I stood in silent silhouette~
Against twilights play in the heavens set
While the resounding crash of breaking waves~
Brought home the lost voices from watery graves...
Filled with the pain bore on a Banshees scream~
Were the voices of nightmares tore out of dead dreams
That within had been trapped the tormented souls~
From the worst broken bodies riddled with holes...
There were some that I heard like madmen to rave~
Many of them frightened, while others were brave
Some so ironic they sounded amused~
Some finally at peace after life by abused...
Voices so distant as to barely be heard~
Ones taken to moaning forsaken by words
Many were the echos of lovers last sighs~
Some telling the secrets of those telling lies...
Acceptance of spoken in wisdom & grace~
By voices too real to not have a face
While together in anger were others collecting~
Pounding the shores as if answers expecting...
And these were but the first of many to follow~
That by dawns early light, again left me hollow
For not one ever heard was that on I waited~
Thus night after night to return, I was fated...
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Re: Voices...
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 06:49:07 PM AEST
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Very good write...
Happy New Year..
honey56 |
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Re: Voices...
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Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:16:14 PM AEST
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| Excellent write |
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Re: Voices...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:31:42 PM AEST
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Oh my .. how WONDERFUL!
This is painfully poetic and exceptionally emotive.
Exactly the type of thought provoking and inspiring
writes I do so love to read. Again and again!!
Sad .. anguished .. forlorn, but so beautifully so!
Excellent job.
~Breezy |
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Re: Voices...
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:44:54 PM AEST
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stirring the depths of the readers heart.
Beautiful dear lass beautiful.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Voices...
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by metalguitarist on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:49:45 PM AEST
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this is amazing i love it great write
read sum of mine if u lik sad tragic poems
always and forever playin guitar
-Metalguitarist |
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Re: Voices...
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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| Great write. I really liked it. Well keep up the good work. |
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Re: Voices...
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 11:08:40 PM AEST
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Kerry, This is an excellent journey into the past. Graveyards tend to be one of the places I like to escape for reflection, the quiet, the solitude....ah and the stories from those wise souls that have passed on. Your slippage into the past life is refreshing. I hear the voices too.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Voices...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:46:49 PM AEST
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Excellent write, Missy! Had the flow such in rhythm with mystery ... and hopeful optimism.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Voices...
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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"Many were the echoes of lovers last sighs~
Some telling the secrets of those telling lies..."
I lingered here for awhile and listened a long time...
Well Done
Peace
AJ
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