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This is what you do to me...
Contributed by
random_kisses_xoxo
on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 12:45:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my stomach is tightening
its almost frightening
you just look at me differently
this is what you do to me
i sit there and smile
more than i have in a while
still wish i were in a new scene
this is what you do to me
i try to be strong
as i just play along
not as strong as i used to be
this is what you do to me
i sit and wait for you to come
until emotional is all i become
wondering why you still cant see
this is what you do to me
finaly here and you hang with your friends
for you, lifes a party, the fun never ends
then your gone and i feel so crazy
this is what you do to me
i just start screaming
im no longer dreaming
no need to listen carefully
this is what you do to me
i cry until i cant breathe
and still you dont seem to see
its passed you by amazingly
this is what you do to me
hands in the air, tears rolling down my face
a moment filled with such discord and disgrace
ive given up this fight silently
this is what you do to me
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2007-01-02 00:45:19]
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Re: This is what you do to me...
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by RandyBabyx3 on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 01:22:37 PM AEST
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Kailee. Its cute. I really like it. Good write like usual. lol
iloveyou[sisterrssss]
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Re: This is what you do to me...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:47:49 PM AEST
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this is a very expressive poem on this particular emotion.. I like the flow and the ending great job
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Re: This is what you do to me...
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by DeepaliDoshi on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 04:25:09 PM AEST
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