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Little Girl Flowers
Contributed by
crow
on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 01:16:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Little girl so saddened
swings in the mid-summer breeze.
Crayola notes,
mountain wild-flowers
can make all daddies well.
Just one moment surrender,
images worn by a child.
Pretty red hearts,
on paper notes
her flowers carefully arranged.
"daddy I love you
then signed her name..
torn to pieces on the floor.
If you look,
this beautiful woman
stands silent.
Little girl look in her eyes.
Shredded notes,
little girl flowers
will litter her heart forever...Crow
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-01-02 01:16:17]
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Re: Little Girl Flowers
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 01:37:06 AM AEST
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You took such pain from this heart and replaced it with such beauty with your words. Yes made me cry but mixed emotions of tears. Love this and thanks for being who you are.
love ya
huge hugs
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Re: Little Girl Flowers
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:52:20 AM AEST
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Wow!
Great work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Little Girl Flowers
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:45:37 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful piece and i love the twist on the ending.. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Little Girl Flowers
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 09:44:56 AM AEST
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beautiful write for a beautiful lady...nice work my friend
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Re: Little Girl Flowers
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by seafire on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 11:38:23 AM AEST
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i loved this poem it made me cry it was touching
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