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The weight of life

Contributed by goodandevil on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 03:27:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The weight of my life upon my hands
I hold my head and cry
I measure my life by broken hearts
Finding it hard to die

Pain travels through my body
Weakening my soul
Worth counted through my failures
How do I mend this hole

Staring straight out at the world
I turn away my face
Allowing myself to shut it out
Im taken from this place

My worthless vessel left behind
A hollow shell of me
My life would just get worse
Had I not set it free

Copyright © goodandevil ... [ 2007-01-05 03:27:45]
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Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 03:38:12 AM AEST
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Happy 2 hear u got thru this.
Awesome writing!
huggs,
emy

Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by SilverDagger on Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 06:34:13 AM AEST
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Lovely write!

My worthless vessel left behind
A hollow shell of me
My life would just get worse
Had I not set it free

I've often felt this way, especially last year when I made repeated attempts. So, I guess all that I can say to you is that I hope you don't feel this way again and I admire the fact that you got over feeling this way.

Keep up the great writing!

Re: The weight of life (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 01:13:09 PM AEST
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Glad to know you got over this
i know the feeling.
good work capturing the pain.
i like this poem very much

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