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Break Away
Contributed by
The_View
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Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 06:09:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Clambering around in the dark of night
Crashing around feeling for a switch
But the light doesnt show what I want to see
Left aside, stuck in this ditch and I cant break away
Cool winter day with its cold winter breeze
I can see your breath, against fading light
Sliding around on ice our minds begin to freeze
Trying to get closer to you, thats what feels right
You can lean on me if you think your gonna slip
Cant be for sure, hard to stand with my hands bound
Not able to understand why our emotions are locked up in crypts
Searching for a key that cant be found, hoping we can break away
Cool winter day with its cold winter breeze
I can see your breath, against fading light
Sliding around on ice our minds begin to freeze
Trying to get closer to you, thats what feels right
One last chance, come what may
What if we fall, What if this ends
These are my questions, for you my friend
I dont want to move on, I want to be more
Am I aiming too high, in this endless night
Where has it gone, this is all I got
Dont let that familiar face, fade away into darkness
What can I do, if your not there
And Im stuck staring into malevolent eyes
While Im not able to break away
Cool winter day with its cold winter breeze
I can see your breath, against fading light
Sliding around on ice our minds begin to freeze
Trying to get closer to you, thats what feels right
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Re: Break Away
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 02:20:15 PM AEST
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An emotive piece here; a wearing of the heart on the sleeve, if you will. I hope things work in your favour. Thanks for posting, and keep up the writes!
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