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A College Kids Toy
Contributed by
true
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Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 12:30:03 AM in AEST
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They say scars fade
And the pain will too
But its been a long time
Since I was anyone to you
And I still bleed
And I still cry
And I still wonder
If this pain will ever die
How can scars fade
if they never heal?
How can I feel better
if this pain is all I feel?
I havent smiled
In three years
And the only light in my eye
Is reflected off my tears
But you still shine
In my memory
And when I close my eyes
Your face is all I see
I know now
Youre never coming back
So for all eternity
There will be something that I lack
My happiness
And any joy
Ive been discarded
Just another useless toy
This scar wont heal
And this pain wont too
Because its been a long time
Since I was anyone to you
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2007-01-06 00:30:03]
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Re: A College Kids Toy
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by books_4gal on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 03:00:35 PM AEST
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The title drew me in to read, and the emotion expressed kept me reading. Can't say that I have ever grieved a loss for so long but the rawness of feeling like a non-entity to someone never really goes away.
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Re: A College Kids Toy
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by doug on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 04:56:16 PM AEST
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At first I thought you were speaking
of a person but now I'm not sure if
you were'nt refering to an actual toy.
I see that this is a departure from your
other style of writing. I think you do them
both well. I enjoyed the first and sixth
stanza. Truly , Doug
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Re: A College Kids Toy
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by Helena on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 01:29:59 PM AEST
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| This poem spoke to me. I to have grieved for years over being discarded and I think you captured that pain beautifully. Great write. |
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