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suck it up buttercup
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 02:56:16 AM in AEST
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whispers screaming in your ears like a bad played fiddle
suck it up buttercup the world is bitter and there is no time to twiddle
can you see the view the answers are getting clear
the sea of choice is dragging you near
this violent violin plays its fighting song
as the chorus hymns solemnly along
living this frighten adventure
a true glimpse in this nativity
this quest for questions are still out numbered
way to many dumb in the wake
time to smack yourself time to claim you take
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lostrelic
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2007-01-06 02:56:16]
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Re: suck it up buttercup
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 03:09:27 AM AEST
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| i like it. its got something to it. i cant exac;ty put my finger on it but i think its good. |
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Re: suck it up buttercup
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 05:32:25 AM AEST
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| I try to suck it up But I am not Buttercup |
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Re: suck it up buttercup
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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You can call me buttercup, bro...LOL To the point as always. Your heart beats strong.
Much peace and big hugs,
Laura |
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