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I will be Empty
Contributed by
untitled
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Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 02:32:05 PM in AEST
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I needed something
What could it be?
I needed much love
Now I'm still empty.
I have learned to live without.
I refuse to cry.
This is what I am.
I am still empty, but still.
I am forever.
I will live on.
And on, and on. Forever
I will be empty.
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untitled
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2007-01-06 14:32:05]
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Re: I will be Empty
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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Very simple, yet complicated. I like it.
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Re: I will be Empty
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 03:36:42 PM AEST
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very powerful write.. you can feel the emptiness in this..
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Re: I will be Empty
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by untitled on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 04:37:32 PM AEST
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Oh, god, the 1st line on the 3rd hiaku is wrong, sorry guys (and girls and the like)
it should be;
And I will live on
and the 2nd line on the first hiaku should be;
What could it possibly be?
sorry... |
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