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UFO?
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 10:12:56 PM in AEST
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Seen or not seen?
Perhaps more in my peripheral vision.
Invisible, or in the shadows?
Is it real, or only imagined?
A thought perhaps, traversing the expanse of my mind.
An idea forms, from free-floating associations.
Not tangible, but a presence is known.
Is this life in another form?
Possibly there is some invisible spaceship about?
Something in the atmosphere penetrates my senses.
Is it within, or something emerging?
I saw what I saw,
but don't know what I've seen.
Yet was it a recognizable entity?
Or imagined vision, but nothing there?
The experience is so ambiguous;
something, but nothing, yet a presence.
Is it with form or structure, opaque in any way?
Or just a patch of hazy substance floating away?
Perhaps a UFO?
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Willofree
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Re: UFO?
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:50:24 AM AEST
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Very cool write, Will. I totally believe there is more life out in the universe. I have seen things I cannot explain, and don't care if I can or not. I saw...I believe. We cannot be the only life in this cosmic expanse. I like how you tug at the idea of what you saw. Always good to read you, my friend.
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Re: UFO?
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:07:59 AM AEST
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I am finding it difficult to consider this to be a write of an extra terrestrial encounter ....
Something in me says it is far deeper than that and you are experimenting ... perhaps metaphorically ?
IF, I am correct in my assumption, your continued experimentation in form and thought are tremendous Terry. If I am wrong ... well the sighting of something unexplained could very well have just this kind of outcome.
Nazzy ~
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Re: UFO?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 02:29:31 AM AEST
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Good work friend. I've seen ufos many times.
There's lotssa mystery out in the heavens.
huggs,
emy |
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