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*GeminiJasmini*
Contributed by
CuriousitysCat
on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 11:48:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A river through my veins
Your blood flows through
Running wildly
In me
Screaming for more
Let go
Dream it all into life
Always reaching for a knife
Smoke coils
Rapidly constrict into nothing
Heartbeat pounding
Upon impulse
Lifted off the ground
I hear no other sound
Aside from your voice
Reason is beyond choice
We are linked
Through eternal bond
With blood and soul
Intertwined
We're falling into love
Press rewind
To where we are sitting
Above
The world and seeing
For the first time
Clearly
All the hidden truths
Having power through the
Other's body
Searching for the unknown
Through shadow and fog
There it is I see
It's the real you in me...
Copyright ©
CuriousitysCat
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2007-01-08 23:48:41]
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Re: *GeminiJasmini*
(User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 04:58:09 AM AEST
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" I couldn't say why you & I are Gemini
if I tried to write a million words a day..."
~Alan Parsons Project
You should of known...neenee ha ha
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Re: *GeminiJasmini*
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:44:59 PM AEST
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After reading this I found myself thinking of the nature of dualities...
You have a real feel for speaking the mind of the other within.
I look forward to more of your work.
Good Job
Peace
Yangdantien
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Re: *GeminiJasmini*
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by Clarity_Rising on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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This poem is very intense, giving off
remnants of adrenaline. The flow of the
poem is very unusual, but I like it a lot.
Keep up the creativity! |
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