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Half before Sunrise
Contributed by
Crow
on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:43:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Chicago night
half before sunrise..
its raining.
Rain, a drop
for every sorrow
every heart-ache
among nameless...
its pouring.
weaving dreams
whiskey prefume
twenty-five cent" songs
be who you want.
Someone`s baby"
someone`s fool"
take your time,
everyone" sits
corner booth.
Its raining...
so many drowning
one -night faces..
nameless songs...Vincent
Copyright ©
Crow
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2007-01-09 08:43:52]
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:57:23 AM AEST
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Vincent...I so love your name. I so loved this write. Ahhh I can just say you take me there. Your words can capture me, and so throw me about in my past. This piece was so lonely, so sad...sometimes the night can be so cruel and the daylight reveals too much. You're a good writer, Crow...glad to read you.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by DrowningHeart on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:00:05 AM AEST
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I love the visuals, great write altogether.
D |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:49:00 PM AEST
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This reminded me of somewhere I used to spend time..... Nice vivid display of images my friend
hugs
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:12:41 PM AEST
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| thank you girls, your to kind..Crow |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 09:08:28 PM AEST
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well written my friend
Shari |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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| I love this title..Half before sunrise..in itself it captures something..and draws a picture. nice job. |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 01:55:07 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful write.. I love the imagary on this .. i love all the stanzas.. awesome job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Half before Sunrise
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 01:35:08 PM AEST
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i love the aura of this write...
love n' hugs nessa
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