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Sorrow's Peak
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Mist rises mournfully
Over Sorrows Peak
Blood red moon shows
Death to the meek
Many hearts broken
Many left to mourn
Many will live to rue
The day that they were born
Crystal dew on violets
Crushed beneath her feet
Tortured soul no longer
Innocent and sweet
Bringing forward spirits
Better left in hell
Revenge her only motive
In bitterness she dwells
Blood will be the payment
For the evil she will loose
Upon the quiet little town
From a tree she ties a noose
On Sorrows Peak
The tall oak tree stands
And here like her Grandmother
She will join Satans band
For once before a young woman
Hung from the old oak tree
After letting loose Demons
Upon the community
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2007-01-09 11:30:08]
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 11:42:09 AM AEST
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OOOoooo Shari, I liked this. A bit of a spine-tingler. I loved stanza number three with the mention of the crushed violets..I was picturing it perfectly in my mind..along with that old oak tree.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 01:13:41 PM AEST
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wow beautifully dark.. its tells a dark story.. I love the ending also.. very good imgary.. thanks for sharing this piece
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 03:46:25 PM AEST
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A wonderful and beautiful, albeit dark, story poem magnificently penned. Kudos, Shari! 'N' a tip o' my cowboy hat to ya!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by mazeof_darkness on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:17:30 PM AEST
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| So sad it is, but beautifully written. Great work!!! |
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 06:29:58 PM AEST
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got chills on the spine good job!
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:47:15 PM AEST
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Shades of the 'Burning Times' of Salem and mindsets en rapt with fears and evils pursuing divinity...
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Sorrow's Peak
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:21:27 PM AEST
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| damn" this is excellent my friend, I enjoyed the read..Crow |
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