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Noticing
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 02:15:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I notice you
You notice me
But tell me dear
Do you notice me notice you?
Do you notice how I notice every change
Every blink, Every smile?
A noticing notice that I notice you give
I smile a smile letting you notice that I noticed it
Oh I do notice the noticing glances you give me
But you dont seem to notice that I notice you too
Do you notice my noticing?
Or has my noticing gone unnoticed?
Pray tell, love, did you notice?
When our eyes met I noticed
I noticed a knowing spark fly by
And immediantly I noticed
You noticing my noticing you
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desolantdreamer
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2007-01-09 14:15:56]
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Re: Noticing
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 07:33:12 PM AEST
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A chunky chewy bit of nougat that reminds me of the T.V commercial in the U.S.A to "apply directly to the forehead."
Good Job
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