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Inocent
Contributed by
angel_baby_no_more
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Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 08:26:52 PM in AEST
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Inocent as it may seem no one knows what a single tear can bring.
Pain and lies, heart break and cries.
Strength can leak from ones eyes and with it washes out all the lies.
Can one person stop a childs cries when all the child hears is their parents lies, even as they watch from the safety under the bed as their parents bodies hit the ground dead.
So when they are questioned no answer is quite as clear as the one that trickled down their faces and carried with them the image of their parents death and the ones who caused the childrens pain.
Pain that caused the children to never love again.
So as inocent as they may seem no one can guess what one single tear can bring.
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Re: Inocent
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:34:36 PM AEST
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Please keep your pen flowing this is a heartfelt write...
May I suggest reading your works aloud...
Wisdom gained from sadness, the loss of 'innocence.'
Peace
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Re: Inocent
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by JohnRobbins on
Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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A strong poem and truthful one indeed.
Powerful lines and great flow to it.
Exelent job indeed |
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