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waiting
Contributed by
xxthexforgotenxonexx
on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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shes been waiting for quite some time
from one obsticale to the next she feels she has overcame it all
but from waiting to get out of one thing only leads into another obsticale
she's a bit tired of waiting
she wants something for her
something thats actually worth waiting for
she's been waiting for quite some time now and still no signs
no signs of anything worth it
then she sit and looked at her vunlerablity
at the exact moment
her breath drew thinner as it did everyday
but this time it stopped completely
she felt faint like she was floating
all turned to black, calm, and silence
while it turned she smiled
finally at last she is free
now she lives in her loved ones
they are now waiting
missing, and loving her till the end
they feel her though she is not there
they are still waiting
but in the end arent we all waiting?
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Re: waiting
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 10:12:38 AM AEST
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wow this is a very wise piece.. Its true about waiting and having obsticles.. I can relate to this.. I swear its so annoying and frustrating to wait for something good when it seems like you get one thing after another and nothing comes together for you.. this is a very well expressed piece on that particular feeling.. awesome job
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